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Sunday
Jul272008

Newsday Website Editing

 

I don't know who edits the Newsday website.  Check out these two stories that appear on the front page of newsday.com.   Here is the first one:
 
Is it me, or should the headline read "Why water has become a commodity"?   And here is the second one: 
"With a historic harbor"?  I know it has become a matter of preference, but it really should be "With an historic harbor."  Perhaps I am just being a little picky on this one, but the first article, with the headline "is become," is just ridiculous. 

 

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